Tuesday, June 26, 2012

Bad Poetry

This is for all those bad poets like me J

Bad Poetry!


When your rhythm is lost,
You run after zombies and ghost;
You keep your lights turned on,
Ticking and Turning...moments gone!
Bad Poetry!

When you halfheartedly breathe,
Losing sights of those bygone wish,
You break symphony of the beast,
You lost and you retreat.
Bad Poetry!

When your hunger turns to greed,
You see meat beyond meat;
Stupor, you excruciatingly greet,
You misstep and kill the beat.
Bad Poetry!

You participate but never inspire,
You seek revenge in despair;
You rampage the sequestered evil,
Turned yourself – you are the devil.
Bad Poetry!

Shamsud
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12 comments:

  1. your Bad Poetry is actually very Good :)

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  2. hahaha..this was not bad at all...change the title to good poetry

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  3. ...I loved your bad one..it's soo goood:)

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  4. Your bad ones are too good.. I wonder how good will be your good poetry like ... :)

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    1. Thank you Anjali...Hope to see your feedback on my other work :)

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  5. You know, if you had a dog called Poetry, you could say it all the time!

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  6. Beauuutiful--though i am no one to judge you,but i feel like saying the thoughts as well as the expressions are fabulous!

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    1. There are no better judges than my readers. Thank you for visiting.

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