Wake Up!
Perceptions are doctrines of miseries,
Leading to unending chaos;
But every chaos leads to calmness,
There is a price to nearness,
You should be behind your deeds,
Measured every day, your needs;
Experiences are not the ultimate tools for a fight;
Reactions are stimulus, not always right.
You have a tight budget for your life,
You start your journey at your birth;
Miniscule motivation is not just right,
You cannot settle without a fight;
Its you…your life
I'm amazed at how your emotions ran through those words and reached out to me. I love this kind of stuff. I try to bring alive such .. finding the right word .. life-driving emotions! into my poetry. I don't know if I give justice to them as I cannot be a "critique or an accolade" for my own 'written-in-the-moment' poems.
ReplyDeleteGod bless you.
@Vinay Prajapati Thank you Vinay
ReplyDelete@Chhavi Vatwani thank yuo chhavi
ReplyDeletevery deep thoughts . . well woven into poetry too . . loved it :)
ReplyDeleteThank you Maliny...cheers :-)
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