Wake Up!
Perceptions are doctrines of miseries,
Leading to unending chaos;
But every chaos leads to calmness,
There is a price to nearness,
You should be behind your deeds,
Measured every day, your needs;
Experiences are not the ultimate tools for a fight;
Reactions are stimulus, not always right.
You have a tight budget for your life,
You start your journey at your birth;
Miniscule motivation is not just right,
You cannot settle without a fight;
Its you…your life
Very N!CE
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1. क्या आपने जोड़ा अपने ब्लॉग व साइट से गूगल+ फ़ॉलोअर गैजेट? तो अभी जोड़िए...
2. यदि फ़ीडबर्नर बंद हुआ तो आपके पास क्या विकल्प हैं?
I'm amazed at how your emotions ran through those words and reached out to me. I love this kind of stuff. I try to bring alive such .. finding the right word .. life-driving emotions! into my poetry. I don't know if I give justice to them as I cannot be a "critique or an accolade" for my own 'written-in-the-moment' poems.
ReplyDeleteGod bless you.
@Vinay Prajapati Thank you Vinay
ReplyDelete@Chhavi Vatwani thank yuo chhavi
ReplyDeletevery deep thoughts . . well woven into poetry too . . loved it :)
ReplyDeleteThank you Maliny...cheers :-)
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