Wednesday, February 22, 2012


This is a very raw poem and I will continue to improve this one. This is the first look and is not completed. I will submit the completed work soon. Please do leave your feedback.

I went to the hill searching for life,
This place has lost its glory;
Unequal City Unequal divide,
Craters all around; No lights in sight.

I went to the monastery searching for peace,
This habitat has lost its speed;
Thoughtful wishes unfulfilling greed,
I Sojourn here; No lights indeed.

I went to the sea searching for new land,
A hope to start afresh and anew;
Wipe and undo the past filled with lust, Retreat!
Lost in the whirlpool; No lights indeed.

I went to dead searching for life,
A tiring journey at the end;
Life – I found here with open arms .Freed!
I met myself here; Lights indeed.

Photographs Source:

Shamsud A


  1. Life is such a complex phenomena to understand. Loved the last paragraph...

    Marvelous expression...:)

  2. Tbank you for your kindness Saru...your words are encouraging


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