This is a very raw poem and I will continue to improve this one. This is the first look and is not completed. I will submit the completed work soon. Please do leave your feedback.
I
went to the hill searching for life,
I
went to the monastery searching for peace,
I
went to the sea searching for new land,
I
went to dead searching for life,
Shamsud A
Life is such a complex phenomena to understand. Loved the last paragraph...
ReplyDeleteMarvelous expression...:)
Tbank you for your kindness Saru...your words are encouraging
ReplyDelete