Monday, August 6, 2012

Child!


Parents - Outcome of a Child
Child - Outcome of Parents?
Outcome of love?
Outcome of time?
Outcome of an unknown rhyme?
Outcome of Needs?
Outcome of Deeds?

Death - outcome of Life.
Life - Outcome of death?
Outcome of breath?
Outcome of an unkown stake?
Outcome of the wild?
Or Outcome of a Child?

Love - Outcome of the heart.
Heart - Outcome of Love?
Outcome of knowledge?
Outcome of a child?

World flattend by time; 
Melting ice in the lava of crime.
Logic Personified to the core
All outcome of a Child.




This post is part of the contest A picture can say a thousand words.. on WriteUpCafe.com

16 comments:

  1. wowww..lovely post buddy :) I'm seeing so many different perspectives on this pic frm different bloggers..its so nice

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  2. @Haricharan Pudipeddi Thank you Haricharan. Yes all of them have written wonderfully. I am trying to portray a Child in New light :))

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  3. Wow.. so many different perspectives for the same picture :) Good Luck with the contest!!

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  4. I loved it Shams:) it's awesome!

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  5. Wow! That was exquisite! Superb!

    Comment outcome of a post? Post outcome of prev comments? ;) Just kidding but your poetry was simply awesome!

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  6. Like - outcome of my reading your poem.

    Regards

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  7. So many questions? So many perspectives? Your poem makes the mind to go in different directions and provokes so many thoughts. Beautifully conceived and I love the way you think. Exquisitely written.

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  8. @Raj Thank You Raj...yep..Its all about the way we look at things :) thank you for your comment.

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