Friday, March 9, 2012

Thy Pulchritude

I am submitting this poem @ http://dversepoets.com/ for 

OpenLinkNight ~ Week 35


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Thy Pulchritude
Where do you want to go today?
Let me throw some sunlight on you;
Do you know the alleyways?
Let me guide you and hope the twilight stays.

You have come from far away land;
But I know that smell;
Even in the midst of storm and years- bygone,
I never lost you, though I was proved wrong.

Those crusaders are synchronizing their act.
And I might be their next prey;
I never longed for a life by this bay,
Dying for my love was always my way.

Let us count the minutes,
And break them in years;
Let me live thousands of decades with you,
If plausible? Few more days!

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16 comments:

  1. very very beautiful... keep writing:)

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  2. Intriguing thoughts; well worth exploring further

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  3. Thank you...happy to see you here. I hope to see more of your feedbacks

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  4. The few days might seem like decades! Very nice!

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  5. i much like the idea of escorting someone with sunlight...very caring and warm...nice..

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  6. nice....you know what...anything for just a few more days you know...and throwing sunlight on someone is a nice touch for sure...

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  7. Thanks Brian for your kindness. This is very encouraging

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